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 SHENZHEN I/O Solutions
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-My solutions to the imaginary micro-controller programming game [SHENZHEN I/O](http://www.zachtronics.com/shenzhen-io/).
+Personal save files for the imaginary micro-controller programming game [SHENZHEN I/O](http://www.zachtronics.com/shenzhen-io/). Surprisingly, my [solution repo](https://github.com/sunzenshen/tis-100-solutions) for another imaginary programming game TIS-100 had a small readership, so may as well revisit that idea for another title I have been playing with.
 
 The raw save files are not exactly human readable, so solution screenshots are also included.
 
-Somehow my [solution repo](https://github.com/sunzenshen/tis-100-solutions) for another imaginary programming game TIS-100 had a small readership, so may as well post solutions for this game as well.
 If these save games are useful or interesting,
-take comfort that I don't really care to enforce some arbitrary copyright on some fun game related code;
-just don't inexplicably harm yourself with it (though that would be impressive, given the imaginary architecture!).
-That said, since I'm planning on posting unoptimized solutions before I complete a first full pass of the game, I'm sure you (dear reader) can do much better with some careful [code bumming](http://www.jargon.net/jargonfile/b/bum.html).
+take comfort that I don't care to enforce some arbitrary copyright on some fun game-related code;
+just don't inexplicably harm yourself with it. (Though that would be impressive, given the imaginary architecture!)
+That said, since I'm planning on posting unoptimized solutions while working through a first pass of the game, I'm sure you (dear reader) can do much better with some careful [code bumming](http://www.jargon.net/jargonfile/b/bum.html).
 
 Enjoy!